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The Divine Miss
Author: Will Ferenc
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(Added on Jan 29, 2008)
(This month 56583 readers) (Total 78839 readers) |
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When a man falls in love with a Dominatrix, he has a whole lot to lose. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
MsRach
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Apr 24, 2012 |
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Enjoyed the story but loved the capture. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
texanpauline
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Feb 8, 2008 |
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Exellent!
Well written, well paced, different approach, good balance of description and action, articulated feelings, originality, properly finished - what more could you want? I really liked it a lot.
Please write more! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
theladystouch
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Feb 4, 2008 |
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The story began a little slowly. I almost gave up on it. I am SO glad I did not. Once the author found his voice it was wonderful. I liked the first person narrative, and the basic plot. The transitions were a little rough, but did not detract noticeably from the story line. The heroine was a little out there, but the subs responses seemed believable. A most enjoyable story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
nickcusa
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Feb 3, 2008 |
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This was an extremely well crafted story taking a subject that is often on the far edge of fantasy and making it very real and believable.
The author does a fantasic job of crafting very realistic, very life-like characters that one can immediately relate to. His presenation of BDSM and "real" slavery is probably amongst the best of any I've read on this website.
What really makes this a 10 out of a 10 is how very well the author presents the submissive's desire for slavery balanced with the reality of it. I think many subs when aroused have fantasized about the idea of complete slavery but once they are no longer aroused "reality" kicks in and they question if they could ever do this. This story takes that submissive and, after being truly warned, shows him choosing slavery - and having made that choice, well, that is probably the last choice he'll make.
The manner of the Dominant, her views on slaves (and her disgust that submissive males are walking around, holding down jobs, living life as if they have the same right as she does) is just fantasic and incredibly hot. Her interactions with the slave are scorching. The author does an incredibly good job of showing how a realistic Dominant woman would really react to the drivel submissve men often spout and how she would then mold the submissive into Her liking.
I can only hope the author will continue the story and write more - this really is one of the hottest, sexiest and best written pieces of Femdom erotica on the internet. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
RachelGordimer
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Feb 3, 2008 |
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Very nicely done! The heroine is a real blast, I might just end up quoting her every now and again. (10/10)
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willowblonde
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Feb 3, 2008 |
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I really enjoyed this story. It was a treat to read something that has been thought about and well written by someone who is obviously articulate. (9/10)
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