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Average (?):  (3/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
(Edit) |
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Feb 20, 2008 |
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The number of wrong words, word forms, and so forth made what might have been a cute tale into suffering. If you are going to try writing a story in "Olde English", as it seems to be, find someone to help you edit it before you post. Your scores could go up tremendously if you do this. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
kemosabe
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Feb 17, 2008 |
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Sorry, I quit after the first three paragraphs. Obviously English is not the writer's primary language. Better that someone who's familiar with English grammer take this story and do something with it. (2/10)
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