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Starfucking Goes Wrong
Author: The Qmoq
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(Added on Mar 8, 2008)
(This month 53886 readers) (Total 65259 readers) |
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Three young women crash a secret party organised by two pervert superstars, with disastrous consequences... |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mr. Pete
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Mar 18, 2008 |
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Excellent story. The one issue I have with the story is the character development. *Spoiler Alert* I could not differentiate between the three main characters, and so I didn't care who got which punishment. It would have been even sweeter if the bitch got the worst treatment (like in "Casino!"). Otherwise, very well-written and engaging story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Qmoq
(Edit) (Mar 19, 2008)
- Thanks for the comments, Mr Pete - you're certainly right about the characters being too alike. I've written other stories where I've been careful to make the characters distinct, though I remember my mood when writing this one and it was more about the action than the characters. I'll take it on board when I write in future! Cheers, Qmoq
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Mar 15, 2008 |
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Really good, both technically and arousingly, AND it's imaginative. Although the author credits another story as inspiration, I've never read one like this (so now I'll have to check it out!). (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Qmoq
(Edit) (Mar 19, 2008)
- Thanks for the good review, Curtis; I hope you did check out the Casino story because it's very good indeed, and you'll see where I was inspired, but hopefully that I didn't copy anything too closely. Cheers, Qmoq
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| Reviewer:
fellatrix
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Mar 11, 2008 |
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Wonderful, sexy, beautifully written story, especially the second part. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Qmoq
(Edit) (Mar 19, 2008)
- Thanks very much for your kind words, fellatrix - I had a lot of fun writing it!
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