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A trip to the farm
Author: John Betthauser
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(Added on Apr 9, 2008)
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I spend the night watching ex wife being used at a friends farm |
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| Reviewer:
kinkcrazy
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Apr 18, 2008 |
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Well written with good ideas. It could be the basis for a lot of follow up (8/10)
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Curtis
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Apr 14, 2008 |
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I'm not a big fan of F/m sories, but this one was pretty good. I liked how you worked in M/f, F/f and F+/m, all with an ex-couple, and most of it involving both of them simultaneously. As for style, I found it a little too 'this happened, then that happened, then the other happened'. There was very little about what anyone was feeling, which isn't always necessary, depending upon the story, but would have helped this time. (7/10)
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