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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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Rating:  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
yosaure
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Jan 9, 2009 |
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Please, the next chapters.
I can't wait any more! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
grinner666
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Jun 1, 2008 |
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Crap. Hackneyed story, cardboard cutout characters. No dramatic or even SEXUAL tension. It's not often an NC sex scene is so boring it doesn't even get me aroused in the slightest, but this story managed it. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jaymin01
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May 12, 2008 |
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Very good story so far, I do like what I'm seeing and I do hope that the story continues (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
SimonMagick
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Apr 23, 2008 |
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The James Bond of the slave trade. Keep this one going. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mirage
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Apr 19, 2008 |
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Interesting Start.
and Yes, do write about slave girls, hating every minute of their slavery but obeying without choice, not those adoring their masters and enjoying their slavery. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
fellatrix
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Apr 19, 2008 |
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Very well written, and sexy, as far as it goes. i hope to read more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
sparty59
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Apr 19, 2008 |
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Nice start (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Master Solidus
(Edit) (Apr 20, 2008)
- For those who send me emails and request it, I can send the newest chapters of the story so that you can get it as soon as it's finished instead of having to wait until the site posts it. If you don't mind waiting, the new chapters will be up on the site shortly.
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| Reviewer:
gnuman
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Apr 18, 2008 |
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This is a start of what may be a very good story. The slaver is a little too much of an ass. Also he needs some assistants, i.e. he ain't going to run his operation alone. (7/10)
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Master Solidus
(Edit) (Apr 19, 2008)
- He's an ass because he must be. I try to portray the main character as one who rules by fear, not compassion. Sex slaves do not recieve kindness. As for assistance, that will come later in the story. For now, the master's our only dominant character at the moment.
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Apr 16, 2008 |
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Great story for a first effort, which has a great deal of potential in the future. The protagonist might be a 'total dick', but he has the right attitude for his role. I look forward to reading more in the future, and raising the grade. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
yago1848
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Apr 16, 2008 |
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a great start! all those interested in nc female slavery will enjoy this first chapter. especially if you are bored with female slaves adoring their masters and enjoying their slavery. here you have the real thing: lots of slave girls, hating every minute of their slavery, but obeying...
hope to read the next chapter in the near future. (9/10)
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Master Solidus
(Edit) (Apr 16, 2008)
- Thanks a lot. I try to portray the story in the darkest light possible. You can obviously see that the guy is a total dick. I want action; lots of the stuff, but at the same time, I want an actual storyline to it as well. The second chapter is well underway; I'll be updating as soon as it's finished.
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