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Tabatha's Prison
Author: Dominica Potestas
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(Added on Apr 21, 2008)
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Tabatha is welcomed into the harsh prison system for women in the fictionary land of Illakia. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Laura.Dane
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May 15, 2011 |
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Strong humiliation, well-written, I found this erotic and enjoyable to read. It very much stimulated my fantasies. (9/10)
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Falcon
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Jun 12, 2008 |
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4/26/08: Agree entirely with review of mkseme.
6/12/08: The second chapter seems less interesting than first chapter. Too much blow by blow description of mundane details - most of which are not particularly erotic. Story still has good potential. Am lowering my initial rating from 7 to 6. (6/10)
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kemosabe
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Jun 11, 2008 |
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I'll make it unaminous. Interesting start to a traditional plot. We'll see what's going to be next that will ultimately determine the rating.
2nd chapter was dull and uninteresting. Very little action appropriate to this site. I must lower my original rating. (4/10)
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turgid
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May 8, 2008 |
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A good start, but the english needs work. Makes it a little distracting to read. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Dominica Potestas
(Edit) (Jun 10, 2008)
- Thank you for the reply Turgid. Can you elaborate on what part of my English needs improvement, as I thought I had everything right. Could you please tell me if I'm making some mistake I can't see as I agree with you, bad English is horbbily distracting in a story. I am aware I wrote fictionary instead of fictional in the intro, but I can't see any errors in the story itself.
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mkemse
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Apr 24, 2008 |
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has the beginning of a real good story, but I would like to see more added to adjust my rating (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Dominica Potestas
(Edit) (Apr 26, 2008)
- Thanks. There will be more, I'm working on chapt 2 now.
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