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Sissy slave to my house hold servant.
Author: Puppy Girl
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(Added on Apr 27, 2008)
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She came into my life as My house hold servant; …,soon she became My wife; but now My mistress. She changed me as sissy slave whore, but all these gone with my mistake … |
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Apr 29, 2008 |
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yes I agree with the previous reviewer. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Apr 28, 2008 |
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I understand the that there may be a language problem because of your origin but the story is so badly written that it is almost impossible to comprehend. I think you have a story idea that is worth exploring but maybe you need to look for some help if you want to continue publishing here. Sorry, this is not personal just the facts about the quality of writing. (2/10)
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