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Jodi's Trails
Author: J Lewis
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(Added on Jul 2, 2008)
(This month 88505 readers) (Total 137922 readers) |
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Woman abducted from a nightclub. Held for several days by abductors before being delivered to her final distination to be trained as a submissive. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 6, 2010 |
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J Lewis' first, and an entrance through the main gate it is. In his now well recognizable style of long sentences made-up of short burst of information to give lots of information in one go, Lewis tells once more a rather painful story of a woman's misfortunes.
Or a misfortunate story of a woman's pains.
As a first, this can count. No hesitant feeling around or searching for the right style, J Lewis instead drives up your lawn with a bulldozer.
he may not be the greatest writer alive, but he knows how to bring and tell a story and how to keep the reader captivated. Even when the story has been done before, thanks to J Lewis' personal style, this is an above average, highly enjoyable read.
Very nice.
JJ (9/10)
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dennisthmn
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Nov 2, 2008 |
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Very good. well worth reading (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
meadow muffin
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Nov 1, 2008 |
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Excellent story but Id like to see more. (9/10)
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irishman112145
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Aug 9, 2008 |
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This is one of the best stories that I have read. I hope that you will continue as I am looking forward to reading the rest. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 10, 2008 |
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very well written, nicely done (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Masterscw
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Jul 7, 2008 |
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Wow can almost feel myself in the story with that crop striking the skin. You struck right to the heart of a real slave. Please continue, can't wait for more. Thanks cw (10/10)
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