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Changing Destiny
Author: CyberDeSade
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(Added on Jan 1, 2002)
(This month 52894 readers) (Total 83384 readers) |
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A young girl of a rich lawyer and her friend are taken into the undergound slave trade by the mafia, one is tormented to train the other. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 20, 2005 |
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the story has great prmoisae, but it badly needs a grammar check, spell checking and editing, if you can correct these aeras, the story has potential but not as it is now, don't add more chapters til you fix this one (5/10)
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agp_millie
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Sep 16, 2003 |
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Good subject, shame you didn't get me to edit it 1st. As spelling and layout not so good.<br>Now please send me Part 2 +++ to edit for you (smile)
agp_millie@yahoo.co.uk (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
don11
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Jul 16, 2003 |
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Too poorly written to be worth perservering with. (2/10)
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Equalizer
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May 31, 2003 |
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Has its moments but I think the author aimed a little too high. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
watcher69
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Apr 14, 2002 |
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Good Start, POOR middle and ending. After the first couple of paragraphs the this story goes downhill quickly. SNUFF should also be added to the description. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
soliscjw
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Jan 3, 2002 |
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This story was one of the best reads I have read in a while I defintly want to read the new chapters. (10/10)
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