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Maya Author: dale10
(Added on Sep 24, 2008) (This month 82373 readers) (Total 122947 readers)
A young girl is the sex slave of her father and brother.

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Weighed Average (?): (5/10)
Average Rating: (5/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
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Reviewer: studmaster58 (Edit) Rating: Feb 25, 2011
Needs more development, but great story lines......... (8/10)

Reviewer: Merc1255 (Edit) Rating: Oct 9, 2008
Good foundation for a potentially great story. Looking forward to reading how the little slut enjoys her treatment. (7/10)

Reviewer: jheller69 (Edit) Rating: Oct 9, 2008
Good story line with many possibilities. It could use some serious editing to make it easier to follow. Consider having someone proof them before you post, to delete the repeated sections. (3/10)

Reviewer: lilmissmolly (Edit) Rating: Oct 3, 2008
the story constantly starts over and is frustrating to ready (2/10)

Reviewer: pollycoventry (Edit) Rating: Oct 2, 2008
lovely but want more (9/10)

Reviewer: ramses (Edit) Rating: Sep 29, 2008
There is a delete button on your keyboard. You should try it on the large blocks of repeated text. I don't mind the girl being mistreated, but I feel sorry for the story, which isn't bad at all. Without the repeats, it could even be enjoyable. (3/10)

Reviewer: SirBosk1 (Edit) Rating: Sep 27, 2008
Well, this time the repeated text was easier to locate in blocks, making it easier to delete off line. I can't figure out why a writer with this much imagination and great ability to devise ever increasing levels of erotic humiliation still can't format a story. In the earlier years, this author used 20 periods instead of a simple comma. He still hasn't learned that two periods instead of a comma or one period, isn't a recognized punctuation method. Panther007, Elkor, and Takarada already said it for the repeated sections. Unfortunately, once again, the author wastes our time some more with his inept writing, almost destroying his brilliant work in erotic humiliation. What a disappointment. (2/10)

Reviewer: Panther007 (Edit) Rating: Sep 27, 2008
Needs formating work. Hard to read. (3/10)

Reviewer: Elkor (Edit) Rating: Sep 26, 2008
This story needs some editing, there are repeated sections and formatting that makes it hard to read. (6/10)

Reviewer: takarada (Edit) Rating: Sep 25, 2008
has potential but some formatting problems and repeated text (7/10)

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