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Ayla's Predicament
Author: ariel emms
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(Added on Oct 8, 2008)
(This month 53281 readers) (Total 66047 readers) |
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two friends wander into a dungeon. one experiences more than she bargained for, perhaps more than she can handle. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 23, 2010 |
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A good story with a clever twist at the end. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 28, 2009 |
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Two girls playing with Pandora's box, only to find hope in the form of a manual at the bottom.
Best ariel emms story I've read so far, just because of the giddiness and incredibly high likeability of Ariel.
Come to think of it, it takes an (arch)angel to write and sound like one.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Oct 16, 2008 |
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This story was the best of this bunch, partially because you didn't try to do too much. In the other ones you became so caught up in telling a story that you left out most of the 'stroke'. (That's a lefthanded compliment about you telling stories well.) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
polle
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Oct 10, 2008 |
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(8/10)
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