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The Visitors
Author: QuantumLeap
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(Added on Aug 7, 2000)
(This month 145964 readers) (Total 171857 readers) |
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A twisty tale of the humiliation of a husband and wife by intruders who are much more than they first appear to be. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 26, 2003 |
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Great story, not a great fan of goth writing, but i loved the power the gang leager holds over the husband and wife and the decription of her in the seamless white hotpants (9/10)
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rcb
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Jun 5, 2003 |
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Very good -- Could have shorten it a bit (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
C |
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Sep 10, 2000 |
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Very good story.Well written and erotic.The last few chapters are weak, but over all a good tale. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Benny |
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Aug 8, 2000 |
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Very good story. One of the best I have read ! (9/10)
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