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Meeting Mistress Lynne
Author: Broken Will
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(Added on Jan 28, 2009)
(This month 71549 readers) (Total 86294 readers) |
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A husband and wife, newly into BDSM meet a woman who teaches her how to better dominate him. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
slaveboy 6
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Dec 24, 2014 |
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Oh, what a lucky man. It was indeed a great read from beginning to end. (9/10)
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slave2woman
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Dec 13, 2011 |
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actually, this is a story on how every marriage should be, it is very well writen and detiled anough to let the imagination of the reader work (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
MISTRESS H
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Mar 13, 2009 |
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Very well written, the story had no dead spots. An enjoyment to read. (9/10)
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kinkcrazy
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Feb 8, 2009 |
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Great stuff (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Escritor
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Feb 2, 2009 |
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Although there's nothing wrong with the story, while reading it I didn't feel it was a story, but rather a report of things happenning. It doesn't create an arousing environment, so it's not even a sexy report...
I think it can be improved, with more feeling descriptions, and some dialogue, which is the most important thing I think this story is missing. (6/10)
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hmvyksi
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Feb 1, 2009 |
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Great story, well written and nicely paced although its a shame it wasn't longer with a little more development. I especially liked the upside down hog-tie, very cruel and arousing. Hope to see more in the future. (9/10)
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