|
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 3 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
100% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
| Highest
Rating: (9/10) |
| Lowest
Rating: (9/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
blossom
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 25, 2009 |
| |
great story, i do hope there is more to come (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 12, 2009 |
| |
(Feb 02, 2009) Good little story. Deserves to be worked out to a much longer tale, but it's solid enough as it is.
Most of the time, these little interludium-like briefs, are lacking in detail and eroticism, but "Not What I Expected" fits just right. It leaves most everything to the imagination, but not in a disappointing manner. It just makes you wonder about what could be...
JJ (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Feb 12, 2009)
- Added a point because of the pretty neat content that was added.
Just try to keep some space between paragraphs, or add spaced paragraphs while writing. It reads so much easier...
JJ
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 8, 2009 |
| |
This was very good, the text blocks could use double line spacing for easier to read to make but I shoud wish to read more of this, I hope this is first part and that there is much more to come.
Is good cautionary tale. (9/10)
|
|
|
About 