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My holiday in Britain Author: fbn
(Added on Mar 5, 2009) (This month 57587 readers) (Total 76316 readers)
During my holiday in Britain, everything and more happened than I wished for...

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Reviewer: lovetoxdress {Mtoltox} (Edit) Rating: Mar 7, 2009
I like the story line maybe a little less whipping more little more forced fem.. (7/10)
Replied by: fbn (Edit) (Mar 7, 2009)
Thanks for your review! you have a point there. I would have liked it that way as well. Although heavilly dramatized it is based on real events that happened during our holiday. Is it good enough to post more?

Reviewer: Dr_BuzzCzar (Edit) Rating: Mar 6, 2009
With some editing to remove some misused words ('crouch' for 'crotch' for instance) and grammar this would be an excellent story. It has a nice flow and good command of dialogue. Nice work. (7/10)
Replied by: fbn (Edit) (Mar 7, 2009)
Thank you for your review! I've just started writing and English isn't my first language. I am happy with your review. I will try to correct the mistakes and re-publish. Do you think it will be worth it to publish the rest of the story?

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