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Author: J Lewis
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(Added on Dec 16, 2009)
(This month 104054 readers) (Total 117403 readers) |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 12, 2010 |
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Another one of my favourite J Lewis stories. Very nice, three dimensional characters -especially Christina's.
Harsh, yet believable settings, greatly capturing a dark foreboding mood thanks to the excellent depiction and descriptions.
Nice.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
nosympathy
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Jan 23, 2010 |
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I really like this story and would like to see it continue. There are some weird descrepancies though. Bonnie's nipples are pierced in Chapter 2, then again in Chapter 8. That doesn't make a lot of sense. Then there is a statement you make in Chapter 9 that doesn't work "her knees touching her butt cheeks". I don't know of anyone that can touch their butt cheeks with their knees. (9/10)
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