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Susan's New Life
Author: rep
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(Added on Dec 17, 2009)
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mika
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Apr 4, 2011 |
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I love the story, yes grammer is poor but the story itself is very good and hot! I hope to see this story continued and look forward to it in the future.
~Mika~ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
CRAZYKETH
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Dec 31, 2010 |
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Awesome read. Not here to see grammar and spelling, I am here to read a darn good story and this is it. Brilliant 10.
Go to the library if you want intellect, or better still (which I doubt) write your own.
(10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Dec 16, 2010 |
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Well, with chapter 4 this story took a turn, didn't it? I'm glad I waited to review, because I'd've given it a '7' based on the earlier chapters.
EDIT: Jimmy has a point. The story continues to be hot-hot-hot, but the misspellings have just gotten way out of hand by chapters six and seven. Score knocked back to '7' because I could no longer recommend this. (7/10)
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JimmyJump
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Oct 8, 2010 |
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Good idea, yet again poorly executed. Intro switches point of view and goes from present day to, well, present day.
Sentences look like training grounds for motorcross racers: oddly structured with pieces seemingly missing or the puncuation marks absent or in the wrong place.
Curtis adds a point because of chapter four being of the kind that gives you sweaty palms. I won't. because it's not like when a steamy part is added the writing all of a sudden becomes great. It doesn't.
Rep has potential, if only he could stop 'forgetting' half the words he wanted to chop down.
In the end, what agravated me the most, was yet again the Formula One speed at which our heroine falls to her willing knees from the moment Stacey's mom starts insulting her. Rubbish.
Like I said, while the story had my doctor worrying about the fluctuations in my blood pressure, the writing leaves a lot to be desired.
JJ (6/10)
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iceblock
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Feb 10, 2010 |
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Don't think I'd ever give anything a 10, purely cos there's nowhere to go if I were ever to read anything better, but on the basis of content this story is defintiely a 10. Lesbian coersion(spelling?) in a reluctant setting, schoolgirl bully, younger dominating older, non-consensuel themes (love the poo punishment for example), basically everything I personally like in a story. And the liklihood of the daughter being dominated too, I can hardly wait for the next part! The writing's not all that great in itself but with this sort of content, who cares! Very well done to the Author. (8/10)
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girlyboy46
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Feb 9, 2010 |
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Can't wait for next chapter. It gets better and better. Well done author. (10/10)
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