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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Heritor
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Jun 4, 2011 |
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Could compete with published authors, though would never be published and would never sell. I thouroughly enjoyed the telling, even as certain fetishes that I do not share became staple elements.
I particulaly enjoyed the references to the Aesexual Pseudonym and attendant literature. It was nice to read something by an intelligent storyteller and writer, as well as a pervert. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
gost
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Jan 29, 2011 |
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Pretty sure this same big word lover put up a slightly better, much darker, too long again, story at xnxx. It's on the story forum there called Beauty if anybody gives a shit. I think it's kind of a book 2 thing. If you liked this never ending crap and want more of the same. And have a spare month to read it. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Losalt
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May 1, 2010 |
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The other review I made of this story have been deleted unfortunately because of the hardware failure.
At any rate I think this is one of the better stories I've read in here.
It's fairly believable characters although some in here claim that the female protagonist is too mature for her age.
Also the erotic bits of the story is not what makes the story good.
It's overall well written I'd say.
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Story: 10/10
The erotic parts 9/10 (perhaps even 10/10)
Overall impression?
I liked it a lot.
I would recommend this story, provided that you, the reader, like stories that have a slow start in an erotic sense and that you don't mind stories of some length.
Losalt (10/10)
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- Replied by:
aesexpseudo
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2010)
- This story is a cut-up of a first draft. The poster tried about a thousand times to update it. Now with the server crashes the poster's account is dead, and the story is dead, and the actual author (NO, not the poster) knows this shit is here now and is truly pissed. In short, there will be no Story #2.
- Replied by:
AgentDesire
(Edit) (Oct 14, 2010)
- So, despite Nascent's post script, I should not expect A Post-American Romance? Dismally disappointing .. . .
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 17, 2009 |
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You already know how I feel about this opus...
JJ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
aesexpseudo
(Edit) (Apr 25, 2010)
- Thanks, JJ.
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