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Finding her place
Author: Zenoida
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(Added on Jan 28, 2010)
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Story of a woman who meets a man with very sadistic intentions. He treats her as he wants, and she tries to come to terms with wanting him anyway (the story is mainly nc) |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
BigCat76
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Jun 13, 2010 |
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Quite exciting little story. Hope for more. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
zesta_crackers
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Feb 13, 2010 |
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I really enjoyed the story. I hope that you write more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Losalt
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Feb 12, 2010 |
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Fairly well written I think.
I enjoyed the realism of the way that the female protagonist where thinking.
At least it looked realistic from my point of view.. but then.. what do I know about the mind of the sub ;)
The story didn't show the male(dom) protagonist's point of view though.
If you think you're able to portray the dom's point of view in a realistic way that might improve the story. Still you don't think you can manage that.. well the story is good as it is too :) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jake Olive
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Feb 2, 2010 |
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Excellent story with strong character development (especially with the sub). The female character provides great insight into the thinking of a natural submissive. Will be looking for more. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
zenoida
(Edit) (Feb 4, 2010)
- Hi, and thanks. I really don't agree that it gives much as a way of insight into the mind of a submissive.. After all, then you would at least recognize it, or want it. It's my fantasy, because wanting bdsm is not really that compatible with also wanting it NC :)
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| Reviewer:
vedonis74
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Feb 2, 2010 |
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GOD!I love this story, there has to be a sequel! I read this two days ago and have been thinking about it ever since, I loved the insights into how she felt and her submission, I think a sequel should include Jack's thoughts. Can he have a modicum of humanity next time please? Thank you, I can't wait! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
zenoida
(Edit) (Feb 4, 2010)
- Thanks, that is really a great compliment, since it was written "just for me". I really have a hard time getting into the head of a dominant, that's probably why he's so mean :) But I'll try, when I get to it.
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| Reviewer:
Beelzebob
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Jan 30, 2010 |
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Well written but could have used a little proofreading. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
zenoida
(Edit) (Feb 2, 2010)
- Sorry, I know. I always get lazy when the page count gets high :( I'll try to mend my wicked ways. Thanks for the rating
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| Reviewer:
Dea Menrfa
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Jan 30, 2010 |
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Looking forward to the next chapter. (8/10)
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