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Thunder, Ben and Eddy Author: BZ
(Added on Mar 29, 2002) (This month 71078 readers) (Total 99446 readers)
Office bitch rebuffes Junior V.P. Eddy. Eddy elists the aid of his brother to transform office bitch to bitch pet.

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Jan 18, 2009
Only problems I have are the way the scene is set and the distortion between who are the good and the bad guys here.
Screwing-up a woman's life just because you don't "get anywhere with her on a personal level" must be the thinnest plotline ever conceived, or at least the most meager incentive for doing what the brothers do.
I would have dropped the "office bitch" background and simply introduced the two brothers as a mad scientists with an agenda.
Anyway, I liked the rest of the story, so there you go.
JJ (8/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Apr 16, 2004
a real gem, keeper what ever you want to call it,
great job (10/10)

Reviewer: teamster (Edit) Rating: Apr 8, 2004
Although the story was a little short on actual sex action, it was well constructed and thought out. I\'m sure we\'ve all known a Beverly at one time or another and experienced a similar desire for revenge. Woof woof. Personally, I think that drugs such as cocaine and ecstasy make a more effective tool for inducing arousal than electrodes, but to each his own. (8/10)
Replied by: bcsollte (Edit) (Apr 11, 2004)
Hi teamster
Glad you liked the story Sandy (aka Beverly) may show up in a future story, I have some ideas as to what should happen to her once she arrives in her new home.
BZ

Reviewer: agp_millie (Edit) Rating: Sep 25, 2003
Brilliant, more please (10/10)
Replied by: agp_millie (Edit) (Dec 28, 2003)
Read again, BZ and made me soak TWO towels as i read from start to end.
Let me know when You have a followup story, especially if it involves a cow called millie (smile)
XXXX 10+/10
Replied by: bcsollte (Edit) (Apr 11, 2004)
Hi agp millie
I haven't been able to write for a while. But Sandy may appear in a future story, but not as a cow. Although that is a subject theme I may delve into soon.
BZ

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