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The Fuckerware Party
Author: Tappy McWidestance
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(Added on Jun 16, 2010)
(This month 111523 readers) (Total 146284 readers) |
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A frustrated wife learns to please herself after attending a sex toy party. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 23, 2010 |
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COMMENTS OF CHAPTERS 1 - 3:
A few spelling errors but nothing to distract from the excellent story. Good description of the characters and settings, but i felt a little more description of the mystery woman, her smell, timbre of her voice, noise/texture of her clothing etc. Also i would have liked a bit more about her feelings regarding how this new relationship affects her marriage.
A good solid story well told, with plenty of scope to become a serial. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
DrLick
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Jun 22, 2010 |
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The story is a pleasant read that flows nice, avoids the usual cliches, and demonstrates the author's imagination. For example, in Chap 3, I love how we feel we're in a gym/dungeon environment, somehow buried underground, somehow in public and dangerous but private and controlled. Many stories would simply explain this, but in The Fuckerware Party, this is all communicated descriptively via the POV of the main character. Don't you feel yourself walking down that hall! Tons of fun. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 20, 2010 |
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(Jun 16, 2010)
Most excellent (to what I hope is the) start. I was a tad let down by the fact that some taken paths were left unventured (Suzy taking more control, Jill, the woman in the toilets) giving "The Fuckware Party" a feeling of being all over the place without Tappy being able to decide which way to follow.
Now that it seems there's more to come, I'll hold my tongue and wait til further material is posted.
So far, so very good, although --like I said-- should the story stay the way it is, I would be disappointed. Just a little.
*EDIT*
The additional chapters 2 & 3 are again fingerlicking good. Although I'm missing some deeper descriptions of Tina's feelings as she's going through her 'ordeals'. No description of the voice either, when heard for the first time. This gives the tale a bit of a rushed air while at the same time leaving the reader slightly on his/her hunger...
But since "The Fuckerware Party" isn't about what *I* like but about what Tappy McWidestance writes --and since the writing is good-- I'll stop complaining and stay in wait for further chapters.
JJ (9/10)
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