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Brooke
Author: Katie Irwin
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(Added on Jun 19, 2010)
(This month 77789 readers) (Total 98607 readers) |
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A young girl explores her submissive side...but her Master takes it further than she expected |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Jun 27, 2010 |
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I found it disjointed and assumke it is another of these Brooke stories where the young lady supplies her details and even photographs and encourages writers to write about her.
Perhaps if the heroine had been called Gladys then I might have score it higher. (8/10)
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Master Equinox
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Jun 26, 2010 |
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If you would have finished the story, it would have been a 10.
I am looking forward to the next episode. The division between past and present makes the story very interesting. The storyline resembles my personal live, though my slave is my age. That makes the story very enjoyable to read.
(9/10)
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Dryhill
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Jun 22, 2010 |
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Sorry i could only stretch to a nine because of the spelling mistakes and the final word(s) being missing.
I agree with JimmyJump a well told story with very clear background and well defined characters. i particularly like the use of a dividing line between past and present action.
A thoroughly good read and a story that could have several instalments if the author so wishes. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 20, 2010 |
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Second entry from Katie Irwin and an oustanding performance, thank you very much indeed.
The first paragraph of "Brooke" is an example of how going about things when opening a story --and hats-off to Katie-- in setting the atmosphere, introducing the characters with some personal but important traits and giving a clear view on what the situation is. And all this in maybe, what, 15 lines?
I also love Katie's matter of fact style, her ability to pinpoint thoughts, reactions and little mannerisms in accurate yet sparse sentences. Little outbursts of logic, getting rid of unneeded luggage without losing eye for detail. On the contrary, what this style does is leave nothing but the details, but in such a way we aren't encumbered by them.
Great writing this is.
Alas, again the story is broken-off mid-sentence, which is a real pity. I'll grant "Brooke" a tenner nevertheless, because what's here is tremendously good.
JJ (10/10)
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