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Lindsey Blossoms
Author: Caine.Paine
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(Added on Jun 21, 2010)
(This month 104444 readers) (Total 118815 readers) |
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Lindsey, a spoiled 18-year-old sexual deviant, accepts her father's offer to join his global human trafficking enterprise. Her first goal, however, is to exact sweet revenge on a few classmates by having them kidnapped and trained to serve her as unwilling slaves. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
dontmindme
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Aug 12, 2012 |
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Fantastic story. Great writing. Good ideas. Would love to see more. (10/10)
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Dasii010
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Jun 15, 2012 |
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This is a wonderfully cruel revenge story, with many humiliating scenes as the main villain plays elaborate mind games with her new slaves. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 25, 2010 |
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I could have sworn this had been posted before. In any case, I *know* I read the introductory paragraphs before. And I ain't the sort who swallows funny coloured little pills or large quantities of highly spirited booze, nor do I inhale all sorts of illicit fumes.
Anyway, "Lindsay Blossoms" is a good story, alas hampered a tad by its unbelievability.
But in this case, it is not so much the story which is rather far-fetched, but the unmitigated trust the father has in his daughter. Which proves the man is a poor judge of character as his kin is as stable as a Geiger counter at Tchernobyl.
So, it's a good thing Caine.Paine has his/her writing skills honed enough to steer attention away from the story's flaws, otherwise this tale would have gone down the drain. At least, down mine.
JJ (8/10)
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