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Where Ponygirls come from
Author: Pervfect
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(Added on Oct 29, 2010)
(This month 62941 readers) (Total 71256 readers) |
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The tale of a young girl named Summer, and her life growing up in a town devoted to raising the best ponygirls. More updates to come, this is my first story ever, was inspired by captv8td. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 30, 2011 |
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i like the concept that all (or most) girls in the atea are raised as pony girls until they are sixteen, then can opt out. However a lot more background is needed, how and why this came about, if anyone can visit this village how come the authorieties have not heard about childrern being forced into sexual slavery etc.
To shallow, to unbelieveable and too many spelling errors. Must make a note not to revisit this story. (3/10)
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emodis
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Dec 14, 2010 |
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i quite liked this story although i think it was a little short and didn't give much intro to the community that Summer lives in. It also seemed a little rushed as though the author wanted to get his segment out of the way and get on with something else. i'll read the next segment. (7/10)
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JimmyJump
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Nov 1, 2010 |
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Story takes off on the wrong foot. It should start by describing the situation in the community, then concentrate on Summer and her place inside that community.
The author should also be advised that there's a huge difference between horses used for labor (like pulling wood-carts) and those used for pulling buggies. the former are 1000 kilogram Brabant horses, the latter are, among others, ponies...
Not a bad write, but too short, too rushed and too shallow. Plus too much sounding like a fairytale.
In this case, four times too equals 6.
JJ (6/10)
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Major Littmann
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Oct 30, 2010 |
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I really like Ponygirl stories, the way the girls get drawn into the Ponygirl lfe, but this was something else, and rather disturbing, and neither was it told too well, perhaps this genre is best left to Captv8td, and I rather hope there won't be any updates, See Training Rose for Pony play that you can try at home. (4/10)
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