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| Reviewer:
Michael247
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Nov 4, 2010 |
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Wait! Where's that big fat bitch?
***I have no idea why I choose to read another story from Book of Evils, but I'm sort of glad I did. In the past, I've had issues with some of this author's work. But "Here She Comes, Here She Comes" is a rather decently told tale of a rather brutal rape and mutilation (if you go for that sort of thing, of a pretty young blond. Book of Evils even provides us a hyperlink at the beginning of the story that takes us to youTube where we are tortured ourselves with a short clip of a 80's blond who seems to be trained in how to pick locks in under two seconds, and ends up getting caught by a massive bitch who threatens to break her pretty little neck. Book of Evils takes that clip and uses it as the basis for his rape scene.
*** As usual with a Book of Evil's story, the description is heavy on action and light on scenery. I would say that in this particular case, the youTube video provided all the context and scenery needed, but knowing Book of Evils from his other work I'm not sure that was a conscious decision. So we'll pretend that it was. This particular story is dialog intense, which does move the plot along at a decent clip. That combined with the narrator's (different from the author)perspective and descriptions of what happened next, gives the reader a rather detailed narrative of the poor girl's rape, psychological screwing, and (we presume) snuff.
*** To be honest, if you go in for the whole "rape should include lots of blood and she should never be able to fuck something again" category of story, than Here She Comes Here She Comes is a pretty good choice.
Michael Alexander (www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (7/10)
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