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The English Teacher
Author: Lockedup737
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(Added on Nov 9, 2010)
(This month 152115 readers) (Total 195652 readers) |
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Miss Harris was the English Teacher at the local high school. She was hated by the students because she was a bitch. In her own mind, she helping them but they all hated her.She had only two students that were doing well in her classes, Brian and Jenny. Jenny was a fourteen year old spoiled brat that decided she was going to play a nice joke on her stuck up bitch of a teacher but an opportunity arises that Jenny couldn\'t resist. The only problem was that Jenny was only fourteen and wasn\'t sure what to do. |
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| Reviewer:
girlyboy46
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Dec 19, 2010 |
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A very good domination story keep it going. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lockedup737
(Edit) (Feb 15, 2011)
- Sorry it took me so long to continue this story. I'm back at it. Lockedup737
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| Reviewer:
jkim
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Nov 14, 2010 |
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Really?! The author is a man! Yes, some spelling errors (attributed to writing too fast, because the action is so hot?) and the use of Name: before a quote makes it a bit stilted. But, the piercing scene was so hot, reminded me of Owned Teacher. And the potential for more sure-to-cum action is there. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
lockedup737
(Edit) (Feb 15, 2011)
- My apologies for the errors. You're right. It's from writing too fast and being in too much of a hurry to get it out. Lockedup737
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| Reviewer:
deedolito
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Nov 14, 2010 |
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What a good story.
It make me so horny that I bring a copy to work and I read it there. All the fantasy you describe are quite exciting. The teacher may wear sexier (stockings, miniskirt, remote control, collar, etc) cloths, but may be not so obviously revelant, because it seems a little strange. But, I already wear kinky stuff at work, so... (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Nov 13, 2010 |
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I have to agree with SensoryOverlord for the largest part, as I too feel that the writing style is too wooden and that there's far too many silly spelling mistakes for comfort.
On top of the woodenness of the writing, the addition of the 'clarifying' names in front of each new dialogue doesn't help the fluency of the reading either.
"The English Teacher" as a story is more than okay. Just a pity that the narrative is rather thin, as if Lockedup737 had his mind on other things and as a consequence didn't let the reader in on the minds of his characters.
For instance, the beginning of the story is spun-out too much, with Miss Harris and Jenny going back and forth too many times, without the writer filling out the scene with some added train of thought from Miss Harris and Jenny. Which results in a tedious situation that could have been far more rich should the text have been upholstered with what both characters -especially Miss Harris- are feeling.
This being said, I liked "The English Teacher" enough to keep on reading regardless of its flaws.
An added letdown is the knowledge that the author is Lockedup737, not because I hold a grudge against the man, but because I know this author is capable of far better than this...
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bullfinch
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Nov 10, 2010 |
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I enjoyed the development of the scenarios and characters. Plenty of potential for an extended story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
SensoryOverlord
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Nov 10, 2010 |
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The writing style is a bit wooden, credibility gets stretched disconcertingly at times, there are plenty of grammar, spelling and 'wrong word' errors. Some repeatedly, such as 'defiantly' when you obviously meant 'definitely'.
But still, it's a hot story, and pleasantly long. I do hope you continue, as teacher has to live with her orgasm denial. A few weeks of this and I expect she'll be *much* more polite. (8/10)
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