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Destini's Punishment
Author: Sir Readrer
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(Added on Dec 11, 2010)
(This month 18835 readers) (Total 34792 readers) |
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girl gets paid back for trouble she caused |
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Weighed
Average (?): (5.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
Snark
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Dec 14, 2010 |
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Could be readable. Try spell check. Try reading it through after you've written it. This reads like a rough (and I mean rough) draft. The story line could work, but there are too many holes and misspellings. (6/10)
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