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Princes-Slave Swap
Author: obohobo
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(Added on Dec 29, 2010)
(This month 60117 readers) (Total 70072 readers) |
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The bitchy princess unmercifully whips the king’s favourite slave girl. As punishment, the king disowns her and orders her to change places with the slave. |
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| Reviewer:
Sojurboy
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Jan 16, 2011 |
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Great idea. Just no panache. Keep the ideas coming, and work on compound sentences above the level of the 8th grade. You do have promise. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Dec 30, 2010 |
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A good if predictable story, but the whipping and sex descriptions are too simplistic and it is ruined by 20th century language such as words like "offices" in a 17th century (?) tale The olde worlde language was great in Fallen from Grace (with a poor plot) so sorry obohobo but I think you are going backwards. (7/10)
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