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Unfair Game Author: bloodsport
(Added on Apr 2, 2011) (This month 94329 readers) (Total 115680 readers)
A plane full of women are captured in Africa and then things get really bad...

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Average Rating: (7/10)
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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Oct 30, 2011
Story keeps the reader's attention. I have to agree on what d1ll1gaf said about some areas being kinda rushed, so, taking more time in describing feelings and happenings wouldn't be a bad idea.
Oh, and try to leave spaces in-between paragraphs. One, big block of text doesn't read comfortably.
JJ (7/10)

Reviewer: d1ll1gaf (Edit) Rating: Jun 12, 2011
This story is a great improvement in writing style over the author's previous story as this story does not have the text overload in the previous story. However, the story still moves too fast with the with torture sessions barely lasting a couple of paragraphs per girl. It would benefit from a slowdown in the action to allow the reader formulate more detailed mental imagery. (7/10)

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