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Owning a Dominant Bitch
Author: Rebelman
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(Added on May 8, 2011)
(This month 95868 readers) (Total 107497 readers) |
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Slow high school story of a humiliated girl, an intelligent girl, a dominant girl, and a heck of a nice guy. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Riptide
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Oct 17, 2011 |
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Great. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
NarutosRamen87
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Jul 10, 2011 |
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Keep it going, please. This story is very well written, my only complaint is that I have a hard time following some of the plot. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
scoripo49
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Jul 9, 2011 |
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Excellent hope to hear more about the growing group, including the father owning snd sharing the mother with everyone. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
GwaiLo
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Jul 9, 2011 |
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Wow, I really enjoyed that. I would love to see the second book to see what happens with Brittany. You've done a great job so far and it would be great to see more work from you :) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Jul 9, 2011 |
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Really well done story! I admit I liked the first chapters more than the last - the change to NC shifted the tone a lot, and the suspension of disbelief kind of plummeted (admittedly that's not the end of the world in erotica). Also a bit sad to see the focus shift so much away from Diane, who seems to be drifting away despite being the main focus of most of the earlier story. Final bit of advice is to give your main characters some features other than sexual appetite: making them interesting will make them sexier. Keep up the good work, hope to read more! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ilfyr
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Jul 8, 2011 |
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I would love to read a second installment with these characters! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
adastra
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Jul 8, 2011 |
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The final update is very different from the earlier ones but it is definitely good. Look forward to part two. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jun 13, 2011 |
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A good start, but there are some problems with the second and third chapters. In Chapter One he gets a one week suspension, but by chapter Two it's become two weeks. His coach tells him he's blown a college scholarship, but he's only a sophomore. Military recruiters won't even take a look at him for two more years, and then only if he takes the specifically Armed Services Battery of Tests (ASVAB, in my day). Unless he was held back a year, he's also too young to have a driver's license.
Still, if you close your eyes and ignore the inconsistencies, it's an interesting story, and the sex parts are entertaining. I'm looking forward to seeing what the 'intelligent girl' wants to do with the 'humiliated girl'.
Oh, and the font for the first two chapters is MUCH more readable than the font for chapter three. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Curtis
(Edit) (May 31, 2011)
- Chapter four was readable, and interestingly inventive (meaning something I hadn't seen before).
- Replied by:
Curtis
(Edit) (Jun 13, 2011)
- 'clothes' not 'cloths', and 'heels' not 'heals'.
Other wise, I'm thinking I should bump my rating to '9'.
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| Reviewer:
forbiddenkitty
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May 30, 2011 |
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Enjoyable, and I'm excited about the next part! (8/10)
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