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Leliana's Lament
Author: Dhemius
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(Added on Nov 9, 2011)
(This month 112243 readers) (Total 171578 readers) |
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The story of what could have happened to Leliana from Dragon Age, when she was captured... |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
PhallenFoenix
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Aug 23, 2012 |
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As noted below, the story has punctuation issues, but it is well imagined and very hot.
I would very much like to see this story continued. (8/10)
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a.broadsword
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Dec 7, 2011 |
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Nice story, spoiled by lousy punctuation, lack of paragraphs mainy but why not "Quotes" instead of those stupid boxes, (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alix
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Dec 1, 2011 |
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Nice story, but the site server seems to have substituted squares for some punction marks; which made it hard to read.8 (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Tavy
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Nov 20, 2011 |
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Although I haven't a clue about the context having never heard of the dragon age I did find this story very enjoyable. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
darthsaad
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Nov 18, 2011 |
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Its really only the way to doc translates over into the online version that takes anything away from this, though a bit more work describing the victim would have been nice. I get that you can just look her up online, which I did, but I still like to be given some verbal imagery. Looking forward to her visiting the torture chamber when her first gang rape is over. Keep up the good work :) (8/10)
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