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395 Author: Robin M
(Added on Jan 28, 2012) (This month 72436 readers) (Total 87866 readers)
Sarah is kidnapped, and to her horror has the same fate as Traci. A girl that disappeared months before hand.

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Average Rating: (7.5/10)
Highest Rating: (8/10)
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Reviewer: wild77er (Edit) Rating: Feb 11, 2012
Was a good start hope to catch the the chapter soon (7/10)

Reviewer: Major Littmann (Edit) Rating: Feb 3, 2012
A good first attempt but the use of the present tense and strnge dialogue ruined it, two sentences from a polite introduction the master is clling her a bitch, hardly credible, surely the Master would have an upper class accent and not lapse into Ghetto Rap at the first opportunity, A good start but try again in the present tense and try to hear your characters as you write. (6/10)

Reviewer: jip (Edit) Rating: Jan 31, 2012
Yes agree. Excellent start, now looking for what will come! (8/10)

Reviewer: coyote3k (Edit) Rating: Jan 29, 2012
It's a promising start. I hope the story continues! (8/10)

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