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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
| Average
Rating: (7.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Jorgy444
(Edit) |
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Aug 27, 2012 |
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Glaring mistakes in grammar and spelling. But other than the poor grammar nicely constructed.
You can almost hear the accent of YC as she narrates which is very creative, but does not seem
to be intended by the author, what a shame!
Lacks polish for a higher rating, thanks for the
story. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
michaelkors
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May 29, 2012 |
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amzaing! I ould love to know more about this slave is she really exist!. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
neopostfeminism
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May 17, 2012 |
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Read the entire story and loved it, though the beginning is written in a very strange fashion it just sounds absurd. You have really have suspend disbelief to get through. But the rest of the chapters are quite good. It's quite marvelously written.
Also, the story is written with such a ridiculous vengeance and loathing. I can almost feel the narrator's breathe on my face as I read it.
As for the gender of the author, I think it is quite irrelevant to the story. This story is obviously a fantasy. No one in her right mind would believe anything written in this story is actually real. But I simply wouldn't pass any judgement on the author at this stage. I have known some vengeful women in my life. And if anyone still remembers, no one could have thought the Story of O was written by a woman either. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bigjohn
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May 14, 2012 |
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A interesting story written from a woman point of view but it was written by a man.
Nothing says I'm a woman.... (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
ALLAHHAVEMERCY
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May 13, 2012 |
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WOW this is a hot story. I especially liked the seccond part where the story alternates between thoughts and action. By the way, yellowcockmeat, are you real? (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
LeoMoriarty
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May 8, 2012 |
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Not bad so far, but several sections of part 1 were taken from Dogwoman Susan Sloan. (6/10)
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