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Tricked by the Brat
Author: Sarah Black
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(Added on Aug 19, 2012)
(This month 72679 readers) (Total 96882 readers) |
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babysitter, of a sort, is found snooping and and up in a bad situation |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Commanderz
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Oct 8, 2015 |
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I love this story. If only I were the baby sitter! (10/10)
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efwb2
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Oct 14, 2012 |
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I would like to read more (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Sep 18, 2012 |
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Updated: 9/18/12 - Chapter 2 held pace, but I'm really looking forward to seeing what Tiff does with Sam! ................8/24/12 - Very good start to what I hope is a long erotic and devious story. The idea that Tiff is going to force Sam to have sex with her boyfriend while being secretly filmed is a fun one, but I'm really hoping this is more of a f/f story between Tiff and Sam. (9/10)
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grinner666
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Sep 18, 2012 |
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The problem with blackmail stories is that so few of them involve any sort of activity that is actually worth blackmailing somebody over. They certainly, in general, don't involve the sorts of crime that anyone with half an ounce of sense would willingly enter into sexual servitude in order to avoid having their "wrongdoings" come out. This is certainly true of this story as well, but the author has avoided the problem ... for the moment, at least ... by tricking her protagonist into taking part in her tormentor's "little games" gradually, until she's physically, not metaphorically, trapped. It's an interesting twist, and I'm finding myself intrigued by what will happen next. Good story overall, marred only a little by the weakness of the blackmail material and the author's failure to proofread carefully. (7/10)
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himannv
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Aug 30, 2012 |
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Nice start. You probably need to go through the text more carefully as there are one or two little mistakes, but other than that, fine job. I think you can really develop on this and come up with a really top notch story, so great start and interesting potential. Keep it going. (9/10)
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Curtis
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Aug 23, 2012 |
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Nice concept, and chapter one was believable. Please post again soon. (8/10)
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Jorgy444
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Aug 23, 2012 |
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Looking forward to the next chapters. Development
of characters and direction of story well done.
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Bellatheslut
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Aug 20, 2012 |
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A good start and I'd be interested in reading more. It's a nice set-up and I look forward to reading how Tiffany uses and abuses her new toy. Hopefully Part 2 isn't far away. (8/10)
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